I did not do as well as I would have liked to on the multiple choice but it shows me that I have a lot more room to improve on for next time. I am not a very good test taker so I need to work on test taking strategies. I also need to improve my vocabulary. I missed 18 and scored a 29/47.
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47.B
48.A
49.E
50.D
51.C
52.A
53.E
54.B
55.D
56.C
57.C
58.D
59.C
60.B
61.E
Question 1
The idea of what leisure is depends on the eye of the beholder. As Eliot describes this man’s day and what he does, she is showing what she believes to be a life of leisure. She reflects on the style of life that this man, who she refers to as “Old Leisure”, had and conveys her thoughts that she wishes her society was like that. I feel as though she admires him and doesn’t want him to be persecuted by their modern standards.
Throughout her story, she describes everything that Old Leisure does thus showing her admiration for the way this old man lives his life. However, she does more than just reflect on his life; she is showing her dissatisfaction for her current day and longs for the old ways. She also respects the old man for his honesty as pointed out in lines 23-29 which by her time was not normal. People went to church and didn’t complain but Old Leisure wasn’t afraid to speak his mind.
Eliot’s style of writing, although choppy, was simplistic. It was simplistic because she merely jotted down the things that the old man did while adding bits of her own thoughts. She constantly shows her delight in Old Leisure and wishes things were that way that they used to be.
Breanna's essay is a great start off point for an excellent idea. She presented great ideas such as starting by describing that Leisure is something that can be interpreted differently by different people. This point is one that didn't even cross my mind and instantly shouts out her reader that she is aware of viewpoint, which is something that can really help her and give her a big push on the AP exam next may. The essay itself is a little short but it was on a time constraint which makes everything difficult and it seems as she used up some of her time before starting the essay doing a prewrite.
ReplyDeleteBreanna also does a good job pulling out literal examples from the text to support her idea of Old Leisure, and the author's general admiration and support for it.